tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11322633.post3108424720557437992..comments2023-10-05T03:40:34.428-07:00Comments on Verge of the Fringe: Tiny Blue Miracle (LIVE)Lance Andersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08711788050323647117noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11322633.post-51536554807823582062013-11-04T21:49:49.764-08:002013-11-04T21:49:49.764-08:00I loved how your story built, Lance, with its risi...I loved how your story built, Lance, with its rising action (based on your mistaken assumption of what you're dealing with), to the conflict and climax (when you get a quick glimpse), to the falling action (when all becomes clear), and finally, to the denouement (that links the event to your own life experience and to your writing and story-telling). It was a very, very moving story. I didn't want to spoil the suspense for others by being more specific, but you'll know what I mean. BeaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11322633.post-80464215914405550162010-08-18T11:53:32.751-07:002010-08-18T11:53:32.751-07:00Thanks Gus! Great to hear from you.Thanks Gus! Great to hear from you.Lance Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08711788050323647117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11322633.post-65342951604784424212010-08-08T13:24:14.664-07:002010-08-08T13:24:14.664-07:00Lance- Great hearing your stuff...took me way back...Lance- Great hearing your stuff...took me way back to our work on Cowboys and Curveballs...you sound well and my, you still got it. GusGusnoreply@blogger.com